My friend just emailed me a part of a song she wrote. im not crazy about it, but!
Question:
My friend just emailed me a part of a song she wrote. im not crazy about it, but what do u think???
ok, my friend is trying to become a singer/songwriter, and she sent me the 1st verse and the chorus of her song to get my opinion on it. im not oo crazy about it, but i wanted to see what other people thought. please be honest with your opinion, its something for her to work with, in her new "career". her song is called ''Blush''
verse 1:
you look at me...
i look at you...
you smiled at me...
and i look away..
i try to hide what i feel inside
but it still makes me
chorus:
blush
when i think of you
it makes me blush
i hope you feel the way that i do
when i blush
i fantasize about you and i...
together
thats what she emailed me. so please give me your opinion on her song so far. all answers are appreciated!! =)
4 days ago
yea its supposed to be pure pop, as she says =)
Answers:
its a bit bland.
to simple.
i dont think she has much talent :/