Do you like my song?!

Do you like my song?

Broken heat lies on the floor,
Foot steps running out the door,
I dont like whats happening to you,
That distant look inside your eyes,
Thought that you would realise,
My heart has stopped it's beating for you,

Chorus: You're my untitled disaster,
No rush could ever be faster,
Please dont let me fall,
Why did you leave me all alone,
No way I'm not going home.

Your face shines on the ceiling,
Cant describe these painful feelings,
Why must this deceving happen,
To you,
I see the thought in your head,
Sometime you wish you were dead,
My lungs have stopped breathing

Chorus:x3

You're my untitled disaster,
No rush could ever be faster,
Please dont let me fall,
Why did you leave me all alone,
No way I'm not going home.

Do you like them?

I LOVE YOUR LYRICS!!!
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you can even post ur lyrics on there!
you're a good songwriter! keep up the good work!