Read this verse and tell me what you think? (not me, but it is somebody who dese!

Read this verse and tell me what you think? (not me, but it is somebody who deserves the world's attention)

ok, this verse is from a dude by the name of Jay Electronica who was born and raised in New Orlean's Magnolia Projects (the very same as Juvenile and Baby) and had enough talent to catch Just Blaze and Erykah Badu's attention (he's Erykah's boyfriend)... lets see if he can impress you:

3 days ago
while you was blowin x amount of dollars on a bracelet/
the sovereign nation of france was openin they files on the ufo phenomenon i.e. spaceships/
its just the facts jack, may as well face it/
every rhyme i write will still get cracked in the chapter of revelations/
a atom get cracked in the blackness of meditation/
mysterious s hit, call me Jay Dogan i'm on some serious s hit/
scholars wonder why do he bust?/
allah blessed me with a meineke touch/
everything i lay to hand turn to ethiopan gold, shiny and buff/
i got a firm understandin on the minus and plus/
so i aint got tiime to argue wit a rapper bout how he aint got rhyymes thats f uckin wit miines/
i'm tryin to kill lucifer/
so if i have to break cuz a rapper in my face tryna tell me he the great/
u can bet i shiny nickel imma blast his m'fin *** way past jupiter/
he couldn't be stupider/
f'in wit the nuclear-mayan/
aztec lion/
louisiana black man from zion/

its lil bit more but it wont fit

I didn't like it. I remember you pointing this dude out awhile ago, but he was nothing special. Maybe I just need more of his stuff. I like the end the most. The creativity was there just not the wordplay and punchlines.

Pretty nice here:

i'm tryin to kill lucifer/
so if i have to break cuz a rapper in my face tryna tell me he the great/
u can bet i shiny nickel imma blast his m'fin *** way past jupiter/
he couldn't be stupider/
f'in wit the nuclear-mayan/
aztec lion/
louisiana black man from zion/

Maybe if you post a little more it'll get better.