How's this?!

How's this?

These are some lyrics I wrote. They are currently titled "Hope".




I swear I'm not what you think I am
but I know that's a lie
I swear I'm fine
but I hurt deep inside

can they really see
this thing I am
but don't wanna be?
do they really care about me?
this feeling has been around
for much too long
I wanna hear the sound
of an ocean of happy songs

I want more
and myheart is full of sores
I want them to heal to get rid of the way I feel


CHORUS: The stars are shining bright
More than any other night
Sparkling like my tears
never realized how lucky I am
"I love You" is what I've been needing to hear
I know I can
live on
on this land
I have hope
and times are darker
and so much more bland
than ever before
but I know
I can cope
because I have hope



life can confuse me
at any time
like a million keys
but no keyholes
i wonder why
I hid the hollow feelings in my
heart and soul
but I know I can survive because


CHORUS

2 days ago
I'll walk alone
I'll go home
do whatever it takes
to try to ease the pain
I'll be invincible
even when I feel invisible
I'll try not to be afraid
because I have hope
no matter what they say
I can cope
when there comes another day
try not to let it go to waste


and when the stars shine bright
and the moon is full
like it is this very night
make a wish
on every star
that I'll be by your side
soon in time

have some hope
cry when you need to cry

I know it's hard
It's hard not to deny
but I promise you
hope is all you need

so tonight you can dream
life is so much more than it seems
hopefully
you'll remember
me.....

those lyrics are awesome!