Movie Idea Plot! PLZ. Read! I need opinions!!!!?!
Question: Movie Idea Plot! PLZ!. Read! I need opinions!!!!!?
Do you think this is a good plot!?
Here is the cast:
-Sam (Danny's love interest, Roy's sister)
-Danny (Sam's love interest)
-Johnny (Sam's best friend, agent in training)
-Roy (Sam’s brother)
When Phoenix, Arizona Police can't catch a serial killer!. They request the help of a federal agency!. 3 people are put on the case (Sam, Danny, and Johnny)!. Roy forces his way onto the case by convincing the case assigner, that he specializes in Serial Killers, and although Sam and Danny are better agents, they aren’t better with this subject!. But here's the twist, the Roy IS the serial killer!. (He really wants to get on the case so that he can shut the investigation down from the inside, and also to see what information they have on him so far!.) While they are on the case, Roy tries to get Sam and Danny (leaders of the case) to drop the case!. Sam refuses, so Roy takes action!. He hires people to help him out, and scare them out of the case!. Sam and Johnny are attacked on numerous occasions!. (He doesn't bother with Danny, because he’s the one of the best agents in the agency, and it’d be too hard to beat him up!.) Eventually Roy takes it into his own hands, and decides to kill Sam, but Sam ends up killing him instead!.
also, during the beginning, Danny flirts with Sam, and she shows no interest in him, but as the story progresses, and Danny shows that he really cares about her, she begins to fall in love and by the end of the story they fall in love!.
I’m working on getting a patent, but I wanted to see if people thought it was a good idea first!.
All comments are welcome!. Any suggestions or ideas are welcome too!. also, if you think that something is stupid, or doesn’t work in my story, then those comments are welcome too!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Here is the cast:
-Sam (Danny's love interest, Roy's sister)
-Danny (Sam's love interest)
-Johnny (Sam's best friend, agent in training)
-Roy (Sam’s brother)
When Phoenix, Arizona Police can't catch a serial killer!. They request the help of a federal agency!. 3 people are put on the case (Sam, Danny, and Johnny)!. Roy forces his way onto the case by convincing the case assigner, that he specializes in Serial Killers, and although Sam and Danny are better agents, they aren’t better with this subject!. But here's the twist, the Roy IS the serial killer!. (He really wants to get on the case so that he can shut the investigation down from the inside, and also to see what information they have on him so far!.) While they are on the case, Roy tries to get Sam and Danny (leaders of the case) to drop the case!. Sam refuses, so Roy takes action!. He hires people to help him out, and scare them out of the case!. Sam and Johnny are attacked on numerous occasions!. (He doesn't bother with Danny, because he’s the one of the best agents in the agency, and it’d be too hard to beat him up!.) Eventually Roy takes it into his own hands, and decides to kill Sam, but Sam ends up killing him instead!.
also, during the beginning, Danny flirts with Sam, and she shows no interest in him, but as the story progresses, and Danny shows that he really cares about her, she begins to fall in love and by the end of the story they fall in love!.
I’m working on getting a patent, but I wanted to see if people thought it was a good idea first!.
All comments are welcome!. Any suggestions or ideas are welcome too!. also, if you think that something is stupid, or doesn’t work in my story, then those comments are welcome too!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
The plot so far is actually good!. It appears that you're heading in the right direction!. Deciding whether the audience knows during the film that Roy is the killer or revealing that he is the killer towards the end can greatly change your story!. If the audience does know the killer from the beginning then you could turn it into a cat and mouse game!. Have there be close moments were Roy is almost caught by his sister or Danny!. also, a serial killer typically would rather work alone!. They would most likely not hire anyone to do their dirty work!. Since Roy works as an investigator, he would be smart enough to know not to involve anyone else!. Plus, those people he would hire would probably guess that he is the serial killer!. Then he would probably have to kill them too!. Throw in a lot of danger at the end!. Have Danny get seriously hurt by Roy at the end!. The ending with Sam killing Roy works!. It is a good moment, especially the fact that she has to kill her own brother!.
Next time you should use friends and family to learn whether your plot is good or not!. There are a lot of people out there who will still your ideas!. Once you finish the story, you should get it copyrighted!.
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Next time you should use friends and family to learn whether your plot is good or not!. There are a lot of people out there who will still your ideas!. Once you finish the story, you should get it copyrighted!.
Good LuckWww@Enter-QA@Com
Well!.!.!.!. okay, the first thing that jumps out to me is, why would Roy want to kill his sister!? And what would make him think that you can "scare" someone off a case!? If someone is trying to get someone off a case, trying to beat them up is the last thing that would work!. And when this happens on the heels of Roy trying to get them off the case!.!.!.well!.!.!.the suspect list just got narrowed down!.
also, just a point!.!.!.you would get a "copyright" for your script; you might also want to get it registered with the Writer's Guild of America!.
Good luck and keep writing!Www@Enter-QA@Com
also, just a point!.!.!.you would get a "copyright" for your script; you might also want to get it registered with the Writer's Guild of America!.
Good luck and keep writing!Www@Enter-QA@Com