What do you think of this idea for a short film?!


Question: The short film is only about 7-10 minutes long. It's about a high school boy that is sick and home from school the day a school shooting occurs at his school. He discovers this while noticing that his friend is being interviewed on a news station. He promtly turns on his cell phone and gets a flurry of text messages and voicemails, to find out that one of his friends (not his best friend, more of an aquaintance) was killed in the class that he would've been in at the time of the rampage. He promptly runs out the door to the school, and the film ends with him and his closest friends in an embrace.


Answers: The short film is only about 7-10 minutes long. It's about a high school boy that is sick and home from school the day a school shooting occurs at his school. He discovers this while noticing that his friend is being interviewed on a news station. He promtly turns on his cell phone and gets a flurry of text messages and voicemails, to find out that one of his friends (not his best friend, more of an aquaintance) was killed in the class that he would've been in at the time of the rampage. He promptly runs out the door to the school, and the film ends with him and his closest friends in an embrace.

Honestly, that's more than seven to ten minutes long. It's an amazingly, emotionally complex event that really a short film with that much scope in mind can't do enough justice to.

Try narrowing the scope a bit. Make it more of the events leading up to the kid finding out about the school shooting. Calling the school (maybe he's skipping instead of sick), slacking a bit, playing video games, and then have his phone go crazy, so much so that it jams up and he can't get any of his messages, the home phone rings with the school number and he's afraid to answer it lest he's found out to be a skipper. Then end it with him finding out about the shooting.

It's still a little complex, but it will also be easier to shoot (the pandemonium surrounding a school shooting would involve too many people to be cost effective.)

Just my first thoughts.

i fink it sounds quite cool
id watch it (Y)

Alright although too short for me

I think it would be pretty neat.

i quite liek it :)

no

I mean it sounds like a good idea but there should be a bit more depth to it, how about a boy that is killed that forever picks on him in the school, and he now has mixed feelings about the massacre, it just sounds a bit cheesy the plot i mean. And maybe you should make the message that even when these nasty things happen and a lot of people are sad high schools can be mean to certain students and some people will just be so depressed that they actually wish it was them that took the place of one of the victims !

Good, but it needs a better ending.

Not bad but it needs a little more of an exciting story to it. Let me help you on it please:

The short film is only about 900-4000 millieseconds long. It's about a high stoner transvestite that is retarded and home from farming the day butt sex occurs at his dojo. He fondles this while noticing that his friend is being forced to drink motor oil in a fondu fork. He proposterously turns on his gaydar and gets a spanking of poop and kaakaa, to find out that one of his Hippopotamuses (not his plyatapus, more of an alfalfa sprout) was milked in the class that he would've been fisted at the time of the spanking. He promptly humps a hobo to the school, and the film ends with him and his queerest friends pooping.



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