Is this a good climax to a movie?!
Question: It started out with me and Maggie in a dark, white, computer room. There are no lights except the lightning coming from outside. It’s raining and you can hear it. Both of us are very scared; we are standing in the middle of the big room on a vintage circular rug. We are facing the two ways door, that is just barely cracked open, with our very nervous faces. To the right was a desk with a computer and papers everywhere. Behind the desk was a small crawl space. The door was closed. I saw the door and then look back. I said it has been a while. Maggie said yeah your right. We walk very slowly out of the room and look every direction. We don’t see him and slowly walk back into the room. We don’t close the door. We start talking about how we are going to get out. I look around for an escape and happen to look over the desk at the crawl space. I see that the door is slightly openand I remembered it was closed before. So I walk towards the crawl space and hesitate a little.
Answers: It started out with me and Maggie in a dark, white, computer room. There are no lights except the lightning coming from outside. It’s raining and you can hear it. Both of us are very scared; we are standing in the middle of the big room on a vintage circular rug. We are facing the two ways door, that is just barely cracked open, with our very nervous faces. To the right was a desk with a computer and papers everywhere. Behind the desk was a small crawl space. The door was closed. I saw the door and then look back. I said it has been a while. Maggie said yeah your right. We walk very slowly out of the room and look every direction. We don’t see him and slowly walk back into the room. We don’t close the door. We start talking about how we are going to get out. I look around for an escape and happen to look over the desk at the crawl space. I see that the door is slightly openand I remembered it was closed before. So I walk towards the crawl space and hesitate a little.
i thought that it is a very good climax