Is this movie script good and believable?!
Question: i am trying as a script writer for a production house,
this is my first script a lot depends on i get it right
it is a script of a girl who is in love with a man whom
she trusts with all her heart.
she finds out he has hidden a lot frm her that he is rich and belongs
to a famous family.
she finds out she is related to him and belongs to a very big family,
she has been hypnotised into forgetting good 95% of her life.
her memory is operating on small part of her mind, rest has ben supressed.
she has been hypnotised into believing her current life is continous
while it is only a script written by him, people around her r good but just actors
directed by him.
this has been done to cure her of a depression in her mind.
she is shocked and meets psychiatrists who r dealing with her,
she finds everyone loving and trustworthy but she is shocked and scared abt her condition
she is unsure whether she wants her memory back as she is supposed to lead a royal life ,
contd......
Answers: i am trying as a script writer for a production house,
this is my first script a lot depends on i get it right
it is a script of a girl who is in love with a man whom
she trusts with all her heart.
she finds out he has hidden a lot frm her that he is rich and belongs
to a famous family.
she finds out she is related to him and belongs to a very big family,
she has been hypnotised into forgetting good 95% of her life.
her memory is operating on small part of her mind, rest has ben supressed.
she has been hypnotised into believing her current life is continous
while it is only a script written by him, people around her r good but just actors
directed by him.
this has been done to cure her of a depression in her mind.
she is shocked and meets psychiatrists who r dealing with her,
she finds everyone loving and trustworthy but she is shocked and scared abt her condition
she is unsure whether she wants her memory back as she is supposed to lead a royal life ,
contd......
i will give my honest opinion: i think this script is catering to a perceived consumer market for these types of psychological thrillers (which is why you have posted this on yahoo answers where you think you can get the opinion of the market you are after). your story seems to be a parody of the truman show and every other psychological thriller out there. it doesn't in the slightest seem believable. If you want to effect peoples lives make characters that can interact in an environment that is, not designed to trick the audience with unessecary meaningless twists, but designed to engage the viewer by allowing them to enter the world you create. By trusting in the viewer to have an attention span and a degree of intelligence, you can tell your story in an original way which doesn't depend on traditional structure which has been refrenced so much, no more meaning can be extracted! watch "adaptation" written by charlie kauffman.
also- anything can be psychologically possible depending on the context or generated reality that you imagine. do you believe your story could happen?
i do like films about zombies. change all of the characters to zombies and i'll go see your movie.
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