Yay or nay on this poem?!


Question: Yay or nay on this poem!?
Have to leave this place
Need to escape
Drop everything and just go
Cant take this

Need to get away
Desperately wanting to run away
Leave it all behind
Scream on an empty highway

Invite the comming lights
See how long I can stare
Then just step out of the way
Just as its about to hit

Want to keep standing
But know I cant
I need to stay
To suffer

Sit in an empty room
Stare at the floor
Crying my eyes out
Begging for something to change

Please God,
Make something out weight the bad
Make it all go away
Or take some and leave me with less

Its just to much for me
I cant hadle it all
Not at once
Leave meWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
Then change it,,walk out of that room and change, you are the only one who can,,, and it starts with a smile, be your own hero,, make a choice, to never feel this way again ,,now go take a good look at your self, and smile ,, if you can smile you can do any thingWww@Enter-QA@Com

Nay!. It is rambling and clichéd !. And you musn't think much of it either if you didn't expend the effort on running Spellcheck!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

good one!.!.!.!.!.excellent
keep up those beautiful poems
!.!.!.!.!.good job!.!.!.!.!.keep up the good onesWww@Enter-QA@Com

Girl you sound depressed!.!.!.!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

Sounds like you need a hug!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

maybe you'd cheer up if you posted these poems in a section that WANTED to read them!?Www@Enter-QA@Com

yay and nah
:)Www@Enter-QA@Com

NO!!!!!
you need to ryme more and make more sence like in part

Need to get away
Desperately wanting to run away
Leave it all behind
Scream on an empty highway
you hav away in there twice thats a no no and in Scream on an empty highway that makes no sence even in songs make more sence then that line sry for being stricked im juest like that sry and dont say im wrong cuse hn i write songs and poems and my dad mom and LA teacher cheks them! put that in ur pipe and smoak it


and do you mean that or did you juest tuch the sole !?!?!? tell me thatWww@Enter-QA@Com



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