Is this better than the poem below....my first time?!

It was my first time ever,
And I'll never forget!.
I'd do it again
Without a single regret!.

The sky was dark,
The moon was high,
We were all alone:
Just she and I!.

Her hair was soft,
Her eyes were brown,
I knew just what
She wanted to do!.

Her skin so soft,
Her legs so fine,
I ran my fingers
Down her spine!.

I didn't know how
But I tried my best,
I started by placing
My hands on her breast!.

I remember my fear,
My fast beating heart,
But slowly she spread
Her legs apart!.

And when I did it,
I felt no shame;
All at once
The white stuff came!.

At last it's finished,
It's all over now!.
My first time ever

At milking a cow!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

---

---