What do u think of my peom?!


Question: What do u think of my peom!?
i see the full moon in the black night sky, i see the ocean so black and cold, i see me swiming under the full moon, with a smile on my face, im swiming swiming, im so calm and peacful, but then i hear a loud beebing noise, i open my eyes, the ocean is gone, its my room and my bed, im sitting here waiting for the ocean to come back!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.


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Answers:
I think it is pretty good!.!.!.!.I really like how you go off to the ocean by sitting on your bed!.!.!.that's neat!Www@Enter-QA@Com

I think you just peed in the bed!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

retarded!Www@Enter-QA@Com

Poetry and Jokes and Riddles are not the same thing! However you people dont realize this!. Their is a POETRY section!. Stop posting poems here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com



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