Tell me what you think of my poem and my story. It's a poem about the world.!
Question: 1. The carousel goes round and round,
And yet our hearts not turning,
Through all the rights, and all the wrongs,
The truth, it keeps on burning,
It’s sad to see so many dreams,
Get thrown away like garbage,
To see them drop and hear their screams.
To see so many fade away,
To see so many go,
Why all they seem to just lose grip,
Well that I’d like to know.
There once was a princess, with hair as golden as the sun. She had many suitors, who had completed many feats for her hand in marriage. Though she did not wish to get married, she enjoyed the attention. There was one brave man that stood out. He had short, brown hair that was as curly as a pig's tail, and was much more courageous than the rest. She secretly admired the young lad, as she thought he was quite handsome. One gorgeous day, he set out to her castle. Mean while, the princess was combing her sunkissed hair into braids and singing a quite marvelous song that rang out into the hearts of the villagers.
Answers: 1. The carousel goes round and round,
And yet our hearts not turning,
Through all the rights, and all the wrongs,
The truth, it keeps on burning,
It’s sad to see so many dreams,
Get thrown away like garbage,
To see them drop and hear their screams.
To see so many fade away,
To see so many go,
Why all they seem to just lose grip,
Well that I’d like to know.
There once was a princess, with hair as golden as the sun. She had many suitors, who had completed many feats for her hand in marriage. Though she did not wish to get married, she enjoyed the attention. There was one brave man that stood out. He had short, brown hair that was as curly as a pig's tail, and was much more courageous than the rest. She secretly admired the young lad, as she thought he was quite handsome. One gorgeous day, he set out to her castle. Mean while, the princess was combing her sunkissed hair into braids and singing a quite marvelous song that rang out into the hearts of the villagers.
BEAUTIFUL i love it you have some talent!!!! oh please please finisg the bottom one :P
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