What do you think of my poem about my friend? shes a girl.?!
Question: You laugh so hard,
I have to yell,
Turn that sound down!
Oh what the hell,
Your L-O-L is such a roar,
My eardrums burst,
My hearing goes poor,
Sorry what was that you just said?
Keep on laughing till your dead!
Amuse our brains with a laugh,
Outbursts creep out,
And annoy the staff,
Your parents put you on the medication,
One pill a day,
To eradicate this infestation,
What else there for us to do,
Get a little laugh and joke out of you!
People can be full of serious serious,
But faced with your laugh,
They become oblivious,
To their shiny red faces,
And mouths open wide,
With an annoying sound,
That they just can’t hide,
Laugh out loud is all they can do,
The class is in tears,
We aren’t laughing at but with you!
Everybody’s laugh is rather different,
But with you in the world,
There’s no competition,
We all do it our own little way,
But damn jess I just gotta say,
Your laugh is contagious,
Just like chicken pox,
My laugh is normal,
But your laugh rocks!
Answers: You laugh so hard,
I have to yell,
Turn that sound down!
Oh what the hell,
Your L-O-L is such a roar,
My eardrums burst,
My hearing goes poor,
Sorry what was that you just said?
Keep on laughing till your dead!
Amuse our brains with a laugh,
Outbursts creep out,
And annoy the staff,
Your parents put you on the medication,
One pill a day,
To eradicate this infestation,
What else there for us to do,
Get a little laugh and joke out of you!
People can be full of serious serious,
But faced with your laugh,
They become oblivious,
To their shiny red faces,
And mouths open wide,
With an annoying sound,
That they just can’t hide,
Laugh out loud is all they can do,
The class is in tears,
We aren’t laughing at but with you!
Everybody’s laugh is rather different,
But with you in the world,
There’s no competition,
We all do it our own little way,
But damn jess I just gotta say,
Your laugh is contagious,
Just like chicken pox,
My laugh is normal,
But your laugh rocks!
I liked your poem about your friend
It had a beginning and it had an end
We all need a laugh to help us get by
Your friend is no different, the alternative is cry
I find it funny to see peoples faces
When they have a giggle theres no 'airs and graces'
Carry on laughing! No matter how loud!
Be happy, be good, but most of all be proud!
nice
thats ok but you need to give it more spark
Nice,but loooooooooooooooooong.
Nice poem. I like it. And I am a , so she should like it. But I am not sure, I'm not her. LOL