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Question: looking for general thoughts and feedback for my paragraph for English class:

Two years ago, the first acquaintance I made at school was a rock. Being shy, I didn’t know what to make of people, so I’d kick a rock around instead. Befriending a rock is simple; there’s no guesswork involved. One year ago, I met someone on the bus. He asked questions, told jokes and seemed mildly enthusiastic. I was skeptical. He asked if I thought he was making fun of me. I didn’t know what to say. “I don’t do that kind of stuff,” he told me. What he said was sincere; now rocks can’t do that.


Answers: looking for general thoughts and feedback for my paragraph for English class:

Two years ago, the first acquaintance I made at school was a rock. Being shy, I didn’t know what to make of people, so I’d kick a rock around instead. Befriending a rock is simple; there’s no guesswork involved. One year ago, I met someone on the bus. He asked questions, told jokes and seemed mildly enthusiastic. I was skeptical. He asked if I thought he was making fun of me. I didn’t know what to say. “I don’t do that kind of stuff,” he told me. What he said was sincere; now rocks can’t do that.

Clever, interesting - I like it.

Don't give up on Rocks so soon. Their great on long drives as they don't talk a lot, they listen without interruption, they don't eat much, and are down right handy in a fight.



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