Is This a good ryme, i came up on the spot?!


Question: im not really good at makin' song
this really isnt so wrong
I just wanna go with the flow
if anyone knows about me
I'd really like to see
how much they care
If I, teer-ed away


Answers: im not really good at makin' song
this really isnt so wrong
I just wanna go with the flow
if anyone knows about me
I'd really like to see
how much they care
If I, teer-ed away

I'm not really good at writin' a song,
All the words, seem to come out wrong.
Only If I could just go with the flow,
I think I could do it,but I don't know?
What I would really like, too see
Is if I was dead, would they even miss me?

the last part didn't rhyme.

uhhhhhhhhh

Nice and creative

i dont think ur the next famous rrhymin person... but wat happened at the end?

heres the one i came up with on the spot....

this is amzyboy
i rhyme to enjoy
this rhyme is so whack
ma mama shud gimme a smack
im eating flamin hot cheetos
cuz i hate tasteless fritos
say wah?

ok maybe im not the next rymin person either.... ok maybe urs is not the worst thing ive eva heard...

Keep working on it. You may come up with something...

its ok

Stick with your first job.

that was dumb really dumb sorry 4 being mean but poetry isnt ur thing :(

lol

PLease hang up and try your call again later



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