Check my new love poem?!


Question: THE END OF A LIE

I don't mind her
And she doesn't care

I won't find her
And she won't look for me

I told her a story
And she told me a tale.

I thought she used to love me
And now I don't care.



inspired by a sag from a gemini. Do you like it?


Answers: THE END OF A LIE

I don't mind her
And she doesn't care

I won't find her
And she won't look for me

I told her a story
And she told me a tale.

I thought she used to love me
And now I don't care.



inspired by a sag from a gemini. Do you like it?

I can relate to the meaning of your poem somehow... Guess maybe I'm a sag =)

Love it!

yeah i think it sounds good....

Better for song lyrics than a poem!

I think she probably did care at one point, but some of us do tend to change our minds a lot...

Geez, sorry about her. We're not all that cavalier with other people's feelings. Don't hold it against sagittarius in general, okay?

its decent...

This would be good for a chorus in a song(just add more), but in my opinion, it sounds like you both loved the thought of love itself, but NOT really towards one another.

Its ok
not the best ive heard
but not the worst either



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