How twisted does this sound?!
Question: How twisted does this sound!?
I'm writing my first novel!. My genre is horror!. Anyway, this novel is about a bunch of sickos, child molesters, mobsters, poachers, arsonists, and people who are cruel to animals getting a taste of their own medicines!. I even designed some of my own medieval torture devices for them!.
First they're going to humiliate the person before they torture them!. One guy is a neo-Nazi/skinhead who brutally murdered two gay men!. The guy is strongly homophobic!. Before he gets tortured, he gets tied up to a chair inside a room with a disco ball!. Moreover, a gay cowboy gives him a lap dance while playing that song "Macho Man" by The Village People!.
The child molesting priest has to wear nothing but an adult-sized diaper!. The put a pacifier in his mouth and make him shake a rattler in his hand while they play "Rock A-Bye Baby" and "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star!." They make him walk around carrying a teddy bear in his other hand while people bombard him with water balloons!.
The guy who's cruel to animals gets a special treat!. He has to wear nothing but Scooby Doo underwear and a baseball cap with dog ears!. On his feet he wears slippers that look like dog paws!. The tormentors pull him around on a leash and make him roll over and play dead!. Then they make him get on his knees and eat Alpo and dog biscuits from a dog dish!.
Another character is a woman!. They make her wear nothing but a fat suit that makes her look like she weighs about 300 lbs!. They're going to make her run across a treadmill while playing that song "Let's Get Physical" by Olivia Newton-John!. They speed the treadmill up gradually while everyone else joins in mocking her and laughing at her!. How do you like this idea!? Www@Enter-QA@Com
First they're going to humiliate the person before they torture them!. One guy is a neo-Nazi/skinhead who brutally murdered two gay men!. The guy is strongly homophobic!. Before he gets tortured, he gets tied up to a chair inside a room with a disco ball!. Moreover, a gay cowboy gives him a lap dance while playing that song "Macho Man" by The Village People!.
The child molesting priest has to wear nothing but an adult-sized diaper!. The put a pacifier in his mouth and make him shake a rattler in his hand while they play "Rock A-Bye Baby" and "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star!." They make him walk around carrying a teddy bear in his other hand while people bombard him with water balloons!.
The guy who's cruel to animals gets a special treat!. He has to wear nothing but Scooby Doo underwear and a baseball cap with dog ears!. On his feet he wears slippers that look like dog paws!. The tormentors pull him around on a leash and make him roll over and play dead!. Then they make him get on his knees and eat Alpo and dog biscuits from a dog dish!.
Another character is a woman!. They make her wear nothing but a fat suit that makes her look like she weighs about 300 lbs!. They're going to make her run across a treadmill while playing that song "Let's Get Physical" by Olivia Newton-John!. They speed the treadmill up gradually while everyone else joins in mocking her and laughing at her!. How do you like this idea!? Www@Enter-QA@Com
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Its quite twisted!. I'm not sure if you should use all of those ideas, just one!. also the music makes it a bit cheesy and takes away from the scarinest of it allWww@Enter-QA@Com
Wow, sounds like there is a lot going on there, if you can keep people following the story how you want, then it sounds okWww@Enter-QA@Com