What do you think of this poem!!!!! I am?!

I am
Iam your death and your last breath
I wounder if the day will ever break this night
I hear the night dwellers cursed screams
I see you laying ther in a pool of blood
I want you to know it will be alright when the sun comes up

I pretend the night will end
I feel the nights air entering my soul
I touch the pool of blood that seperates us
I worry you are to far gone
I cry your name in the dark
I am your death and your last breath

I understand that it is over
I say nothing that could confort your dead body
I dream it will be alright
I tried to help you
I hope you know I'm right here by your side
I am your death and your last breathWww@Enter-QA@Com

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