What do u guys think?!?!
Question: What do u guys think!?!!?
hey guys what do u think of these song i wrote!!! its my first time!
time flies by so fast
daddys lil girl is getting married
daddy shows thats hes really happy
but he hides the pain inside
he cant let go
he cant see hes angel being protected
by another man
daddys lil girl leaving home
she doesnt wanna go
but lifes came to the point
where she must go
no no she cries
daddy dont let me go
i cantlive without u
u r my lifee daddy
i need
but the daughter is mad she doesnt wanna leave
she says she cant breath without him
but daddy wants her to spent her life with
the man she loves
he will treat u better than me go go
she cries wont come out of the brides room
everyone is shocked
the ceremony has to stop
she yells dont wanna get married
no no daddy i cant let go
i need u
daddy i need u
i need u yes thats true
i cant live wihtout u
i want u
by my side
please daddy look into my eyes
cant u see the tears i cry
i cant take it anymore
daddys lil angel is leaving home
u r my life
daddys lil girl leaving home
she doesnt wanna go
but lifes came to the point
where she must go
no no she cries
daddy dont let me go
i cantlive without u
u r my lifee daddy
i need
youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
time flies by so fast
daddys lil girl is getting married
daddy shows thats hes really happy
but he hides the pain inside
he cant let go
he cant see hes angel being protected
by another man
daddys lil girl leaving home
she doesnt wanna go
but lifes came to the point
where she must go
no no she cries
daddy dont let me go
i cantlive without u
u r my lifee daddy
i need
but the daughter is mad she doesnt wanna leave
she says she cant breath without him
but daddy wants her to spent her life with
the man she loves
he will treat u better than me go go
she cries wont come out of the brides room
everyone is shocked
the ceremony has to stop
she yells dont wanna get married
no no daddy i cant let go
i need u
daddy i need u
i need u yes thats true
i cant live wihtout u
i want u
by my side
please daddy look into my eyes
cant u see the tears i cry
i cant take it anymore
daddys lil angel is leaving home
u r my life
daddys lil girl leaving home
she doesnt wanna go
but lifes came to the point
where she must go
no no she cries
daddy dont let me go
i cantlive without u
u r my lifee daddy
i need
youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
awwwww Thats so great! i feel so mutch emotion comming threw this!. If this is made up its a wonderfull made up thign but if this is person GEAT use of getting your view acrosss!. IM so in lvoe with this!. With a great sound with this you could go far :) rooting for ya :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Honeslty,
I dont' think anyone wants to hear a song about an girl obsessed with her father!. It's kind of creepy actually!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I dont' think anyone wants to hear a song about an girl obsessed with her father!. It's kind of creepy actually!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think it's pretty good :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's a nice tribute to daddy, but I feel sorry for the groom!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
its soooo cute, luv it!. have a star!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
i really like itWww@Enter-QA@Com
too much readingWww@Enter-QA@Com
not bad!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
some of the words arent even rhyiming so practice that ok!. Then come back to us for anymmore questionsWww@Enter-QA@Com