Do you like the corus to this song i'm writing? Do you have any suggestions?!


Question: this is it but it sounds better with the acoustic music i wrote for it

in one word life is imperfect
but we are all simply an addict
fighting for a boy at the age of nine
the meaning of life we may never define
we only live life for fun
but the circle must always go on
a baby crying at the crack of dawn
but soon to grow up because life must move on
it moves on, it move on, it moves on
ooooh ohohoh
just like the world revolving it moves on


Answers: this is it but it sounds better with the acoustic music i wrote for it

in one word life is imperfect
but we are all simply an addict
fighting for a boy at the age of nine
the meaning of life we may never define
we only live life for fun
but the circle must always go on
a baby crying at the crack of dawn
but soon to grow up because life must move on
it moves on, it move on, it moves on
ooooh ohohoh
just like the world revolving it moves on

i think that sounds pretty good... maybe you could put the guitar chords that are used under the lyrics



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