Another song?!
Question: Hi again. Thanks for the people who told me what they thought of my song before, you guys are great! :) I will be posting more, and heres another. And again please tell me what you think, thanks!
What You've Been
So you probably don't know
but I guess I'll have to tell you so
you've pierced me in the heart
and it's shattered across the floor
and your just sweeping it all away
and the pain you've left
is to much to bear –
{Chorus} your betray to this friendship
has crossed the line --
I've tried to breath the same air
but you keep leaving me,
you know I'm here
but you keep ignoring me
(everything I say)
doesn't mean a thing (at all_)
we were once so very close
and now we are nothing no more
(things we've talked about)
the memories that we shared
now I just cannot bear
I miss you now so much
forever –
{Chorus}
Please come back
Please come back_
so we can be
something great again
a friendship that can be (loving_)
that could last forever
we could be together...
forever --
Answers: Hi again. Thanks for the people who told me what they thought of my song before, you guys are great! :) I will be posting more, and heres another. And again please tell me what you think, thanks!
What You've Been
So you probably don't know
but I guess I'll have to tell you so
you've pierced me in the heart
and it's shattered across the floor
and your just sweeping it all away
and the pain you've left
is to much to bear –
{Chorus} your betray to this friendship
has crossed the line --
I've tried to breath the same air
but you keep leaving me,
you know I'm here
but you keep ignoring me
(everything I say)
doesn't mean a thing (at all_)
we were once so very close
and now we are nothing no more
(things we've talked about)
the memories that we shared
now I just cannot bear
I miss you now so much
forever –
{Chorus}
Please come back
Please come back_
so we can be
something great again
a friendship that can be (loving_)
that could last forever
we could be together...
forever --
first verse is creative
chorus suks, and too orginal
keep trying, u doing good lolz
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