Scale of 1-10?!


Question: okay... I am in detention and I wrote this. yes, I have a computer in detention. *pokes my other question* but anyway, I wrote this randomly.. its not very good. what do you think of it, scale of 1-10.

Im asking this in different sections, just for variety... so sorry if you have seen it before.

I wrote this.. eh, its not very good but yeah.
scale of 1-10?

torn apart the distance it separates us.
tears at our hearts but we won't let it go
we know this is right.
the ability to do nothing, but the need to fly
tearing us apart but we won't let it win.
we knew from the start and we won't give in.
moving thourgh life, zombified.
the need to move on, the want to hide.
I sit here and wait for you,
I know that your waiting too.
dreaming of the day we will be together
its pulling at our hearts,
tearing us apart.
two seperate hearts, two seperate lives.
joined by love.
we won't let it go.
don't let it die.


Answers: okay... I am in detention and I wrote this. yes, I have a computer in detention. *pokes my other question* but anyway, I wrote this randomly.. its not very good. what do you think of it, scale of 1-10.

Im asking this in different sections, just for variety... so sorry if you have seen it before.

I wrote this.. eh, its not very good but yeah.
scale of 1-10?

torn apart the distance it separates us.
tears at our hearts but we won't let it go
we know this is right.
the ability to do nothing, but the need to fly
tearing us apart but we won't let it win.
we knew from the start and we won't give in.
moving thourgh life, zombified.
the need to move on, the want to hide.
I sit here and wait for you,
I know that your waiting too.
dreaming of the day we will be together
its pulling at our hearts,
tearing us apart.
two seperate hearts, two seperate lives.
joined by love.
we won't let it go.
don't let it die.

Wow - that's pretty good. I got the best mark for my English SATs in my year but I could never write something like that. As soon as you said you were in detention I thought you'd be another silly girl with no brains, but that's really good. I'm sure some people can really relate to that. You should be a poet - you have talent. Keep it up!
Hope that helps!
p.s happy v-day
oh and I'd give it a 9

Mmmm mmmm good:) Im going to give that a 9

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