Hi, I'm spanish. I need your help,please. Can you correct the mistakes of my!


Question: Antonio Banderas was born in 1960 in Malaga, Spain.Neither his mother nor his father were actors, but Antonio loved films from an early age. He enrolled for classes at the School for Dramatic art.He got his first role in 1982 with "Labyrinth of Passion.In 1988,hegot married with Ana Laza, but the marriage ended in 1996.
Melanie
Melanie Griffith was born in 1957 in New York, USA.Her mother was an actress.She got her first film role in 1975 and was in "Night Moves" but she's been very succesful since"Body Double" as Holly Body.She got married four times with three actors; Don Johnson, Steven Bauer and Antonio Banderas.In 1975, Melanie started dating actor Don Johnson but they split up in 1976. Thirteen years later they made up, but then they got divorced.
Antonio and Melanie have known each other since 1995 when they met and fell in love.
They got married in May 1996.


Answers: Antonio Banderas was born in 1960 in Malaga, Spain.Neither his mother nor his father were actors, but Antonio loved films from an early age. He enrolled for classes at the School for Dramatic art.He got his first role in 1982 with "Labyrinth of Passion.In 1988,hegot married with Ana Laza, but the marriage ended in 1996.
Melanie
Melanie Griffith was born in 1957 in New York, USA.Her mother was an actress.She got her first film role in 1975 and was in "Night Moves" but she's been very succesful since"Body Double" as Holly Body.She got married four times with three actors; Don Johnson, Steven Bauer and Antonio Banderas.In 1975, Melanie started dating actor Don Johnson but they split up in 1976. Thirteen years later they made up, but then they got divorced.
Antonio and Melanie have known each other since 1995 when they met and fell in love.
They got married in May 1996.

Not too bad. #1:

In several places you have omitted a space at the end of a sentence. It goes ... last word, period, SPACE.

"got married with..." is a poor construction. "got married to..." is OK, but better here would be "In 1988 he married Ana..." We never say "married with" but of course, you do (...se casou con...)

#2. Again, you have omitted several spaces -- you must have them after periods, before "Body...," several other places. Proof your work carefully.

Cange "She got married with..." to: She married three different actors -- one of them twice. Change "made up" (slangy and not accurate) to "remarried, but then they divorced again."

Last sentence: omit the "got." We say "got" all the time, but it's a bit crude -- try to avoid it in your written work.

Finally, paragraphs should be blocked when not indented. For this kind of writing, hit the "return" key a second time to add a blank line between paragraphs, as I have done here.

Good luck. You're doing very well.

you mean your hispanic, i think u put a little to much years like 1960, 1957,..etc put those times in order in the paragraphs/sentences

full marks for me well done!

Antonio Banderas was born in 1960 in Malaga, Spain. Neither his mother nor his father were actors, but Antonio loved films from an early age. He enrolled for classes at the School for Dramatic art. He got his first role in 1982 with "Labyrinth of Passion". In 1988, he married Ana Laza, but the marriage ended in 1996.

Melanie:

Melanie Griffith was born in 1957 in New York, USA. Her mother was an actress. She got her first film role in 1975, which was in "Night Moves", and she's been very succesful since acting in "Body Double" as Holly Body. She got married four times to three actors; Don Johnson, Steven Bauer and Antonio Banderas. In 1975, Melanie started dating actor Don Johnson, but they split up in 1976. Thirteen years later they made up, but then they got divorced.
Antonio and Melanie have known each other since 1995 when they met and fell in love. They married in May 1996.


No serious problems, just needed a bit of "touching up".

Antonio Banderas was born in 1960 in Malaga, Spain. Neither his mother nor his father were actors, but Antonio loved films from an early age. He enrolled for classes at the School for Dramatic Art. He got his first role in 1982 in the film "Labyrinth of Passion". In 1988 he got married to Ana Laza but the marriage ended in 1996.

Melanie
Melanie Griffith was born in 1957 in New York, USA. Her mother was an actress. She got her first film role in 1975 and was in "Night Moves" but she's been very successful since her role in "Body Double" as Holly Body. She got married four times to three actors: Don Johnson, Steven Bauer and Antonio Banderas. In 1975, Melanie started dating actor Don Johnson but they split up in 1976. Thirteen years later they made up, but then they got divorced.
Antonio and Melanie have known each other since 1995 when they met and fell in love. They got married in May 1996.

The answer from 3595 is correct except for the Melanie section. To improve the sentence 'She got married four times' I would say 'She has been married four times to three actors'. And then...'Thirteen years later they remarried, but then they got divorced'.

Antonio Banderas was born in 1960 in Malaga, Spain. Neither his mother nor his father were actors, but Antonio loved films from an early age. He enrolled in classes at the School for Dramatic Arts and got his first major movie role in 1982 with "Labyrinth of Passion." In 1988, he married Ana Laza, but the marriage collapsed in 1996. Antonio met Melanie Griffith in 1995 and they fell in love marrying in 1995. She was born in 1957 in New York. Her mother was an actress and Melanie got her first film role in 1975 in "Night Moves" but she's made her big break since starring in "Body Double" as Holly Body. In 1975, Melanie started dating actor Don Johnson but they split up in 1976. Thirteen years later they made up and married then agai went their seperate ways. She has been married four times to three actors; Don Johnson, Steven Bauer and Antonio Banderas. .

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