Do you like the song I wrote?!


Question: The only thing I ever want from you was for you to hold me close and tell me you loved me. How can you live with yourself when you know you lie. Especially when you see me dying inside.

What happened to the dad I used to know? When you used to never let me go. Telling me to follow my heart and never lose a part of me. You've changed inside and out. Not knowing what this world was all about. And I just want to say one this to you, what have you turned into?

How hard was it for you to admit, or were you just lying to me all along, pretending to care. What kind of father were you to never hug me when I cried? Why don't you man up and admit what you did. I just wanna get rid of every memory I had with you. My heart will always be broken in two.

What happened to the dad I used to know? When you used to never let me go. Telling me to follow my heart and never lose a part of me. You've changed inside and out. Not knowing what this world was all about. And I just want to say one this to you, what have you turned into?

I can never forgive you for what you did. We were such a happy family back then. Pulling out old pictures to see our smiling faces. I can never look you in your eyes and say, that I love you. I lost a big part of me that day. My world fell apart without you in my life, but my life is not yet through . I'm strong enough to make it without you. Without you. without you. Daddy, I know you don't care, so quit trying to hide.


Answers: The only thing I ever want from you was for you to hold me close and tell me you loved me. How can you live with yourself when you know you lie. Especially when you see me dying inside.

What happened to the dad I used to know? When you used to never let me go. Telling me to follow my heart and never lose a part of me. You've changed inside and out. Not knowing what this world was all about. And I just want to say one this to you, what have you turned into?

How hard was it for you to admit, or were you just lying to me all along, pretending to care. What kind of father were you to never hug me when I cried? Why don't you man up and admit what you did. I just wanna get rid of every memory I had with you. My heart will always be broken in two.

What happened to the dad I used to know? When you used to never let me go. Telling me to follow my heart and never lose a part of me. You've changed inside and out. Not knowing what this world was all about. And I just want to say one this to you, what have you turned into?

I can never forgive you for what you did. We were such a happy family back then. Pulling out old pictures to see our smiling faces. I can never look you in your eyes and say, that I love you. I lost a big part of me that day. My world fell apart without you in my life, but my life is not yet through . I'm strong enough to make it without you. Without you. without you. Daddy, I know you don't care, so quit trying to hide.

i love it!! my friends dad is a DJ and if u get some music behind it he might be able to recored it and then air it. e-mail me if you want

very! welL!

I like it!

I really do like it :) its very emotional and sounds like its from the heart keep it up and post some more :) you are quite talented considering this is you first song you wrote xx xx

it's good
sad, but good
if it is written from true experiences then they are always the best
things written from the heart are always more emotional and better i find

That's awesome! Great Job! I bet your other songs will be even better!

I'd moreso call it a poem or even a diary entry. Unfortunately there are too many words to be put into a song. Trim it down to about half the size, put a couple chorus's in there, add a catchy beat, and you got a hit!

its REALLY good i cant believe that this was the 1st song u wrote!!!! ( the lyrics are really good but the music to it has to be equally good too so u cant really judge the song, only the lyrics)

in the beginning it sounds like a love song to ur ex or something but then u start talking about ur father so u might want to make the audience realize that this song is bout ur dad a little sooner and wat is the cause of his change?

ya i like it
it is best song i had ever read.keep it up

you should get into poetry. i want to become a singer but i am trying to get to now the basics in portraying in a singing carer. what i think you should do is to edit your song. i really like it. its from the heart.

It seems very good for the first time.

seems good.



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