Writers block again.....one more please?!
Question: well baby i'm so tired of ya doing me wrong?
now i'm a laying it out cause we don't get along.
it's taken me this long to realize
ya can't drink your problems way with whiskey and rhye.
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anything to go with that?maybe one line or two even? or a chorus to work with.......
Answers: well baby i'm so tired of ya doing me wrong?
now i'm a laying it out cause we don't get along.
it's taken me this long to realize
ya can't drink your problems way with whiskey and rhye.
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anything to go with that?maybe one line or two even? or a chorus to work with.......
This is your bag !
Write songs with people in this format.
How cool.
What kind of groove are you hearing?
I heard it in 3/4, but it could go either way.
"Rhye Whiskey, Whiskey and Rhye
I wouldn't have done it, if you wouldn't have lied,
But it's clear to me now, what I've got to do
Leaving is lonesome, but I'm leaving you"
I guess that would be more of a chorus.
Make sure to let me know if you get this song cut, I want a co-write ;)
i would rather have apple pie and your sweet voice and kisses
So I got me a ticket, and I'm travelin' light
Now you're just another shadow from just another night.