What Do You Think Of This Song Written By Me?!?!

Question:

What Do You Think Of This Song Written By Me?!?

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I wrote this song all by myself so please tell me what you think about it and PLEASE BE HONEST:
I had a crush on you
Since second grade
But you never noticed me
Until today
We started out friends
Then one day
On the bus
We shared our secret feelings
Then that day you asked me to be your girlfriend
And it was alright
Until that day
I waked in on you when I wasn’t supposed to and I saw what I shouldn’t have seen
But I understand
I just have one question

CHORUS:
Who is she and why is she
In my place
Why are her lips
Touching yours
When I should be
Sharing my secret feelings with yours
I see you have a connection
But this isn’t something that will heal my depression
I need some protection now
To heal my river of tears

I ran out of the room
Before you could explain
I didn’t want to see your face
It was as if it was a race
With no end
And no future
And that’s why I must say
Goodbye
I’ll see you someday
But our hearts will never reunite

CHORUS 1X

Answers: Wow! I love it! I only wish I new what the tune was.

You should record it and make your own band! Not bad - sorry you are so hurt. nice. i like it. Its cute I like it,but you sound like you're so sad.

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