What do you think of this poem???!


Question:

What do you think of this poem???

I wrote it, what do you think???

Sparkle

The magic stirred in me
The day our eyes met
My heart jumped for joy
With every word you said
I loved the way
Your eyes sparkled
Every time you heard me laugh
You said the sun seemed
To shine a little brighter
You really made me smile
And helped me keep my
Life in check
You love everything I do
But my song was unfinished
Like the way my heart
Felt, after you left
But the day you came back
Is the day you made
MY eyes sparkle
If you left me to
Go find yourself
I’d still find myself
Staring at your picture
And imagining
Your sparkling eyes


Answers:

It doesn't sound that good to me. On the other hand if a girl wrote that to me, my heart would skip a beat and I'd faint from the sheer magnificence of... ok it's pretty good...


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