I love to write my own music!! plss tell me if i'm good or bad?!
Question:
I love to write my own music!! plss tell me if i'm good or bad?
Is it a song? Or is it my heart?
When you touch my skin, my face lightens up
When you kiss my lips, my body rises to the top
Never thought a beautiful guy like you
Would fall in love with a girl like me
Hoping your words are true
Because I think you and I are meant to be
Is it a song? Or is it my heart?
Saying these beautiful words to the one that I love
I’m so confused
Because I’m little lost
Trying to figure out
When you say I love and you won’t trust
Luis I’ve told you many times to wait
Thank you and I shall love you in every single way
My heart will always be yours
Hold me baby and let our love grow more and more
Don’t forget the tears you have cried
Cause the next time I’ll be there to hold you tight
Is it a song? Or is it my heart?
Saying these beautiful words to the one that I love
I’m so confused
Because I’m little lost
Trying to figure out
When you say I love and you won’t trust
Till the day I die
I would hold your hand and say you’re always will be mine
Things in life they say it’s worth a try
When I rejected you I promise I won’t do it twice
You’re the guy that makes me smile
So hope you won’t go and leave me behind
Is it a song? Or is it my heart?
Saying these beautiful words to the one that I love
I’m so confused
Because I’m little lost
Trying to figure out
When you say I love and you won’t trust
May you please be my boy?
You would sure fill my life with lots of joy
I want you and I love you hope you feel the same as I do
Baby boo be mine
Cause I’ll love you every time
Luis Curet you are the perfect men
And this is how my story ends
Answers:
it's ok.,
but, Luis?
skip the name.
why do you have to put the name, in the first place.
it's good, keep it up.
i also think that it all depends upon the music that you'll apply in it.,
and it is always the best when it comes from the heart.
keep your work no matter what others think.
don't let them put you down.
be an artist in your very own way.
keep it up, man
good luck.