I wrote a few poems last night...?!


Question:

I wrote a few poems last night...?

I need to know your opinion on them. They really are from me and they really do explain how I feel about some things. They arent titled.

I'm sicking myself to this medicine
Trying to forget the memories
A tear runs down my face
I have flashbacks of the things I once had

You are an addictive drug
The heroin in my soul
Why is it always you I think about?
I dont know why I'm not over you

I wish it wasn't over
Give me another chance
I promise I can make it better
I'll break the addiction and make us last.

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Froget the world
Free your mind
Soar into the sky
You are what you need to find.

Watch the bird
So free and light
It flies over the clouds
Into the heaven skies

Who you are is what you are
Dry your tears and trust your heart
Dont let life cloud your eyes
There's courage in you and a smile that never dies.
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Additional Details

5 days ago
I can't believe I'll never see you again
All I wanted was to be your friend.
Something brought us together
Something tore us apart

Your were the best and I still believe it
I said the wrong things and was too in love
I'm ashamed to be clueless as to what to say
My point is I miss you and think of you everyday

5 days ago
I can't believe I'll never see you again
All I wanted was to be your friend.
Something brought us together
Something tore us apart

You were the best and I still believe it
I said the wrong things and was too in love to know it
I'm ashamed to be clueless as to what to say
My point is I miss you and think of you everyday

5 days ago
Oh. and about poem #1...I dont do drugs. Its just a figure of speach saying im addicted to this boy i still love deeply.


Answers:

They're all interesting; well-written to. But if you'd really
like to submit them to a magazine, then you should go
over them a few times, even if only to work out the few
punctuation errors and typos.
Besides, you might decide to word some of them a bit
differently. (Of course, that would be up to you--but it is
not up to you whether or not to spell or punctuate words
correctly. E.g.: dont, instead of don't.)

Good luck.


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