What do you think of my yaoi manga?!


Question: What do you think of my yaoi manga!?
Plot:
A teen girl in desperate need of money takes a job as a housekeeper!. She is thrilled to discover that the owner of the house is a mangaka, and even more thrilled when she finds out that he shares his house with six good-looking mangaka-in-training!. However, she has no romantic interest in the boys and would rather see them pair up with each other!. The manga consists of her using various wacky plans in order to get the boys together!.

Characters:

The girl: Being a yaoi-obsessed fangirl, she is determined to get each boy to fall in love with another!. She also hopes to one day become a yaoi mangaka!.
Appearance: Shoulder-lenght black hair, light skin, and green eyes!.
Age:15
Personality: Spunky and determined!.

Her best friend: A die-hard yaoi fan!. She loves taking pictures of the boys and squeal a lot!.
Appearance: Curly brown hair usually in a ponytail, tan skin, and blue eyes!.
Age:15
Personality: Bubbly and cheerful!.

Boy 1: The only one that goes along with the protagonist's plans!. He likes acting lovey-dovey towards the others in order to freak them out, although he secretly has a crush on Boy 2!. His specialty is horror manga!.
Appearance: Short brown hair, light skin, and brown eyes!.
Age:15
Personality: Happy-go-lucky and spontaneous!.

Boy 2: Refusing to admit that he likes guys, he tries his best to ignore whatever schemes our hero comes up with!. His specialty is fantasy manga!.
Appearance: Shoulder-lenght blonde hair, tan skin, and blue eyes!.
Age:16
Personality: Machoistic and short-tempered!.

Boy 3: He is very shy when it comes to love, and panics when faced with romantic situations!. His specialty is action manga!.
Appearance: Short black hair, light skin, and blue eyes!.
Age:15
Personality: Shy and timid!.

Boy 4: All about having fun, he had gotten tired of the every-day routine and was happy when our hero showed up!. Although he doesn't go along with her plans, he likes Boy 3 and wants help him cure his shyness!. His specialty is romance manga!.
Appearance: Curly black hair, black skin, and green eyes!.
Age:14
Personlity: Adventurous and a thrill-seeker!.

Boy 5: Ever the pessimist, he avoids interacting with the others!. Instead he busies himself with his manga, hardly ever taking a break!. His specialty is drama manga!.
Appearance: Short red hair, light skin and brown eyes!.
Age:14
Personality: Cynical and serious!.

Boy 6: He loves playing pranks and strives to make everyone happy!. His current goal in life is to make Boy 5 laugh at one of his jokes!. His specialty is comedy manga!.
Appearance: Curly short blond hair in a ponytail, light skin, green eyes and glasses!.
Age:16
Personality: Funny and a troublemaker!.


So what are your opinions!?

also, I really need to name them!. Any suggestions!?Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
:DD This is amazing! I love it, and would love to read this one day! My only complaints are
1) That she's a housekeeper!. This seems like Furuba and Crimson Hero all over again, and I'd suggest a different way for her to be in a house with a bunch of gorgeous guys!. She doesn't even have to live in the same house as them, maybe next door with a perfect view into their home, and access as a friend!. She could do something to make them in debt to her, which allows her free access in!.
2) I think too many of the guys are gay!. The chances that so many gays are in one house and having crushes on each other are slim to none!. This is just a suggestion, but you should make more straight guys, a few love triangles if you insist on keeping guys, and maybe them even already having romantic complications outside of the house to add in a bit more drama!.

Otherwise, this sounds like a yaoi-fun-filled story, and I anticipate it's making!Www@Enter-QA@Com



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