What do u think of my 1st naruto x hinata FC?naruhina fans only plz *thanks*?!


Question: What do u think of my 1st naruto x hinata FC!?naruhina fans only plz *thanks*!?
Naruhina FC
It was a bright and sunny day in the Hidden leaf village!.
Naruto was out training in the east forest!.As always Hinata was watching him as he praticed!.Then a thought hit Hinata,s mind "maybe its time I told him how I feel"
She took two short steps an stared to think twice about it!.
Naruto sinced some one nearby and looked around to cheak if anyon was watching him!.After a couple looks around he stopped thinking about it and coutined trianing!.
Hinata could,nt take it any more she had to tell him but how!?She paused and thought for a long second untill she came to an idea "maybe i shouldask him if he would like to go have ramen with me" Hinata thought!.Hinata stared shyly walking up to Naruto and gulped in worry!.Naruto noticed Hinata in just a split second "Hey Hinata what up ya wanna tell me something!?"Naruto said!."w!.!.!.!.well!.!.!.!.!.ummmm!.!."she began "I!.!.!.!.!.I!.!.!.!.!.W!.!.was!.!.!.!.Wond!.!.!.!.!.!.wonderi!.!.!. h!.!.!.!.have!.!.!.!.ra!.!.!.!.ramen!.!.!.!.!.w!.!.!.!.!.with!.!.!.!. said blushing madly!."sure Hinata I love to after all i love ramen
after all"Naruto said with a big smile!."T!.!.!.!.!.thats!.!.!.!.!.g!.!.!.!.great!.!.!.!.N!.!.!.!.!. studdered!."Yeah sure see ya there ok!?Naruto yelled in happiness!."o!.!.!.ok"Hinata shyly spoke!.After Naruto had gone and left the training grounds Hinata started home to get ready for tonight!."I cant do this,what will I say to him!?"what do I do!?''Hinata said unsure!.Nightfall fallen over the Leaf village and Hinata began to feel very nervous!.Hinata walked the the ramen bar that was just down the street!.Up ahead she saw Naruto waiting for her outside the ramen bar!.Hinata thought to herself "ok just act normal and try not to overact about this"Hinata thought!."Hey Hinata ready to eat , cus im starving"Naruto grined at Hinata!."Y!.!.!.!.yeah!.!.!.l!.!.!.lets!.!.!.!.eat!.!.!."H!.!.!. said!.Naruto grabed a seat next to Hinata and they orderedtheir ramen!.The two didnt talk much but still was having a good time eating together!.After eating ramen and having a small conversations about themselfs the sky was dotted with millons of stars and they knew it was time to go home!."Do you want me to walk you home Hinata!?"Naruto asked nicely to Hinata!."y!.!.!.yes!.!.t!.!.!.thank!.!.!.y!.!.!.you!.!.!.N!.!.!. said with thanks!.About half way to Hinata,s place,the silence was soon broke!."N!.!.!.!.!.Naruto-kun!.!.!.!.!.c!.!.!.!.can!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Hinata said shaking nervously!."Sure what is it Hinata!?"Naruto smiled kindly!.''W!.!.well!.!.ummmm"Hinata started to stare down at her feet and felt like fainting like she always did when she spoke to him,but luckly she did,nt!.Hinata took a deep breath a began to speak softly!.''N!.!.!.!.Naruto-kun!.!.!.!.I!.!.!.I''Hinat!.!.!. was stopped by Naruto,s hand on her hand!."I know I love you too Hinata and I finally relized it tonight"Naruto smiled!.Hinata started blushing madly and was left without anything to say back!.
Naruto started to slowly lean in closer and closer to Hinata and gave her a long passionate kiss and started holding her close!.Hinata and Naruto both agreed that no words were needed at all!. They broke the kiss and headed to Hinata,s place!.By the time they reached her house it was already midnight!.Naruto said"well it looks like were here,I guess ill see ya later ok Hinata"Naruto said with a sweet tone!."N!.!.!.!.!.Naruto-kun!.!.!.t!.!.!.!.!.thank!.!.!.y!.!.!. smiled at Naruto!.Naruto gave Hinata a loving hug good bye''N!.!.!.!.Naruto-kun!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I!.!.!.!.I!.!.!.l!.!.!.!.!. huged him back!."I love you too Hinata"Naruto said turning to face Hinata!.Naruto gave her a kiss on the cheek and they both wished one another a good nights rest!.As Naruto started walking to his own home Hinata watched Naruto disapear into the darkness of the night!.
THE END


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Answers:
Cool! A cute idea of NaruHina!. Anyway, you should post it on fanfiction!.net so you will get more responses!. Good job, though!Www@Enter-QA@Com

holy frick you people have to get a lifeWww@Enter-QA@Com



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