Rate my anime story (Sakura Neko part 1 chapter 5)!
Question: Rate my anime story (Sakura Neko part 1 chapter 5)
Everything was going perfectly for the rest of school,Kaito was happy and so was Naomi!.Naomi didnt even think about Suchibu she was so happy about what Kaito said!.!.!.
*Later that day*
Naomi had just gotten off the phone with Yumi (Finaly) and was feeling exhausted from the very loooong conversation!. She closed her eyes a little,than after a few minutes she dozed off!.!.!.!.!.
"Master Akito-sama,One of the girls has found her powers!.!.!.but she is weak,we can destroy her very easily!.!.!."Mai said looking up at someone!.
"Good!.!.!.You must find her immediately and crush her before the others find out about their powers!.!.!."The man the girl called Master Akito,said!.
Mai smiled and let a white fang apear from the corner of her mouth!.!.!.
"Be sure to bring Hana with you!.!.!.!.!."He said
"Yes,i'm sure we will destroy those!.!.!.cats!."Mai said showing both of her fangs,her blood red eyes glowing like fire!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Naomi awoke after a few minutes of deep sleep,she opened her eyes!.!.!.All she could see was this fluffy black and white fur!.!.!.
"HIRO!!!"Naomi screemed as she tossed the cat at her door!. Hiro plopped onto the floor!. "MEOW!!!"Hiro hissed at Naomi and left the room!.!.!. Naomi heard her computer make a cliknig noise,she looked over at the screen rubbing her eyes!. *Computer:1 new message* She clicked on her inbox!.
(E-mail)
Dear Naomi,
I know this is short notice and you havent known me very long,but I was wondering if you wanted to go on a date with me!? Yumi said you would be gald to so she gave me you E-mail address!.If you would like to,I will be over at Yumi's house,dont ask me why she just told me to come over!.!.!.
Sorry for earlier i just want to make it up to you!.!.!.
-Suchibu
Naomi let out a sigh,"Yumi,Yumi,Yumi!.!.!.!." Naomi went downstairs to see where Aunt Kimiko was!. She looked over at the kitchen table,there was a small note!.
Gone to store be back later,when i come back i will tell you all you need to know about your powers!.!.!.!.
'Maybe!.!.!.I could go,I dont want to hurt Suchibu-Kun's feelings!.!.!.!.'Naomi thought!.Naomi turned the note over and wrote that she was leaving but will be back before to late!.!.!.
Naomi went back up stairs and found the prettiest red dress she could find!.!.!.!.
She changed into the dress and put her hair up in a ponytail,her hair still covering part of her right eye!.She took a decorative pair of chopsticks and placed them in her hair!.!.!.along with a n orange flower she found in Aunt Kimiko's garden!.
*later*
Naomi walked up to Yumi's house (since she lives right down the street) and she saw Suchibu standing there,looking down!.He looked gorgeous!.!.!.!.Suchibu looked over at Naomi!.He smiled!.!."Hi!.!.!."He said!. Naomi smiled at the boy,and walked over to him!. Yumi bursts through the door!. "OOOH NAOMI!!!YOU CAME!"Yumi said and ran to hug her!. Naomi whispered in her ears "im gonna!.!.kill you!!"She whispered!. "sorry!.!.!."Yumi whispered,she didnt seem sorry though!. suchibu walked over to Naomi,and held out his hand,he opened the door to his limo!. Naomi eyes opened wiiiiiiide as she went inside!.Suchibu and Naomi were in the back seat,and there was an American man dressed in black driving the Limo!.Than drove away!.
"Good,the girl is distracted,we will strike now!"Said Hana!. "Yes,lets follow her sister Hana-chan!."Mai said!.
The 2 faded away!.!.!.
Yumi was waving goodbye to Naomi when something caught her eye!.!.!.She kneeled down to pick it up!. "Whats thi!.!.!.a!.!.bell!?"Yumi said picking up the Little golden bell!.!.!.it lit up,Yumi felt very strange!.!.like something was overpowering her!.!.!.!.!.she felt like she was changing!.!.!.!.
~To be continued in part 2 chapter 5 of Sakura Neko~
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*Later that day*
Naomi had just gotten off the phone with Yumi (Finaly) and was feeling exhausted from the very loooong conversation!. She closed her eyes a little,than after a few minutes she dozed off!.!.!.!.!.
"Master Akito-sama,One of the girls has found her powers!.!.!.but she is weak,we can destroy her very easily!.!.!."Mai said looking up at someone!.
"Good!.!.!.You must find her immediately and crush her before the others find out about their powers!.!.!."The man the girl called Master Akito,said!.
Mai smiled and let a white fang apear from the corner of her mouth!.!.!.
"Be sure to bring Hana with you!.!.!.!.!."He said
"Yes,i'm sure we will destroy those!.!.!.cats!."Mai said showing both of her fangs,her blood red eyes glowing like fire!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Naomi awoke after a few minutes of deep sleep,she opened her eyes!.!.!.All she could see was this fluffy black and white fur!.!.!.
"HIRO!!!"Naomi screemed as she tossed the cat at her door!. Hiro plopped onto the floor!. "MEOW!!!"Hiro hissed at Naomi and left the room!.!.!. Naomi heard her computer make a cliknig noise,she looked over at the screen rubbing her eyes!. *Computer:1 new message* She clicked on her inbox!.
(E-mail)
Dear Naomi,
I know this is short notice and you havent known me very long,but I was wondering if you wanted to go on a date with me!? Yumi said you would be gald to so she gave me you E-mail address!.If you would like to,I will be over at Yumi's house,dont ask me why she just told me to come over!.!.!.
Sorry for earlier i just want to make it up to you!.!.!.
-Suchibu
Naomi let out a sigh,"Yumi,Yumi,Yumi!.!.!.!." Naomi went downstairs to see where Aunt Kimiko was!. She looked over at the kitchen table,there was a small note!.
Gone to store be back later,when i come back i will tell you all you need to know about your powers!.!.!.!.
'Maybe!.!.!.I could go,I dont want to hurt Suchibu-Kun's feelings!.!.!.!.'Naomi thought!.Naomi turned the note over and wrote that she was leaving but will be back before to late!.!.!.
Naomi went back up stairs and found the prettiest red dress she could find!.!.!.!.
She changed into the dress and put her hair up in a ponytail,her hair still covering part of her right eye!.She took a decorative pair of chopsticks and placed them in her hair!.!.!.along with a n orange flower she found in Aunt Kimiko's garden!.
*later*
Naomi walked up to Yumi's house (since she lives right down the street) and she saw Suchibu standing there,looking down!.He looked gorgeous!.!.!.!.Suchibu looked over at Naomi!.He smiled!.!."Hi!.!.!."He said!. Naomi smiled at the boy,and walked over to him!. Yumi bursts through the door!. "OOOH NAOMI!!!YOU CAME!"Yumi said and ran to hug her!. Naomi whispered in her ears "im gonna!.!.kill you!!"She whispered!. "sorry!.!.!."Yumi whispered,she didnt seem sorry though!. suchibu walked over to Naomi,and held out his hand,he opened the door to his limo!. Naomi eyes opened wiiiiiiide as she went inside!.Suchibu and Naomi were in the back seat,and there was an American man dressed in black driving the Limo!.Than drove away!.
"Good,the girl is distracted,we will strike now!"Said Hana!. "Yes,lets follow her sister Hana-chan!."Mai said!.
The 2 faded away!.!.!.
Yumi was waving goodbye to Naomi when something caught her eye!.!.!.She kneeled down to pick it up!. "Whats thi!.!.!.a!.!.bell!?"Yumi said picking up the Little golden bell!.!.!.it lit up,Yumi felt very strange!.!.like something was overpowering her!.!.!.!.!.she felt like she was changing!.!.!.!.
~To be continued in part 2 chapter 5 of Sakura Neko~
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Answers:
hey! r u adding vamppires!?!?!? i jsu watched vampire knight and that was really cool! maybe u r doin a little vampire vs cat!? that would be cool!.!.!. and i was wondering does naomi like suchibi!? coz she dressed up so niciely for him i was thinking she would jus wear sum jeans or sumthin hmm!.!.!.!. anywaz i really like this part coz u seemed to add a litlle mystery in this one! so i give it a !.!.!.!.10! congrates
hope u continue to write!Www@Enter-QA@Com
hope u continue to write!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Loved it !!!!.Just like your song!!
You should seriously write a book and publish it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
You should seriously write a book and publish it!Www@Enter-QA@Com