Please rate my story part three!
Question: Please rate my story part three
Naomi and her mother are dining at her house!. Her cat is walking around the kitchen and Kaito notices that the cat has acted out of instinct, it didn't act the way a cat was supposed to!. The cat appeared to pick up chopsticks and eat some rice!. Baffled Kaito turns to mman san and asks her when can you daughter and I go to the school to work on poloy sci assignment!. Which is what!? Kaito say's "It's Othello in Vietnam" What !? It's a paper we're working on about Othello fighting in the jungles of Viet Nam!. Suddenly the cat jups up and Kaito screams as the claws scratch his face!. Stunned they stare into space wondering how all this just happened!. Laughing as they hear a phone ring, it's Steve who wants to know what the heck is Kaito going to do to try to mix this story in with a far more rational writing partners story!. Bore them to tears ,Kaito counters, but how can you be so bold!? You always did what you were told!. Welcome to my nightmare!. HA HA HA HA Seriously I am joking around!.!.!.!.but not really!.!.!.!.!.!.like a chat room without having to face your chat partner in the ring so to speak, simply got tokeep it moving keep it moving, Well I'm off to make my lousy 21 dollars an hour !.Www@Enter-QA@Com
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Naomi's mother is actualy gone,she left Naomi with her sister(Naomi's Aunt Kimiko)
I liked this part but i think you should change it a little bit,other than that its good!.
Naomi call her aunt,Aunt Kimiko-san as a form of respect!.!.!.
(these are forms of respect used in japan)
Chan-mostly used towards small children and girls!.
Kun-Mostly used after saying the name of a cute boy(that is actualy what it said)
San-high form of respect
Sama-A higher form of respect than san
There are more but these are all i could remember
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I liked this part but i think you should change it a little bit,other than that its good!.
Naomi call her aunt,Aunt Kimiko-san as a form of respect!.!.!.
(these are forms of respect used in japan)
Chan-mostly used towards small children and girls!.
Kun-Mostly used after saying the name of a cute boy(that is actualy what it said)
San-high form of respect
Sama-A higher form of respect than san
There are more but these are all i could remember
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It's very fast!. Too fast description!. It's hard to imagine!. And hard to understand!. I'm sorry!.!.!.!.!.!.
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4/10!?Www@Enter-QA@Com