Rate my story 1 to 10?!
Question: Rate my story 1 to 10!?
one day the rabbit from trix went outside to get his mail when a black mini van pulled out it was tocan sam with a pistol to trixs head then he said "bye bye" and shot trixs was dead then snap crackle and pop came snap snaped tocans neck then pop poped his spine out and crackle cracked his knuckles then captin arnold swartzanagger killed snap crackle but pop ran away to a striper bar there was anne nicole smith pop "wait a minute she is dead" then tony the tiger poped out of her skin with a 69 turrent shot gun and killed pop for 2 year tony worked at a bar as a bar tender then micheal jackson killed him to this micheal jackson raped children everywhere!. THE END p!.s!. tell me if you want a sequealWww@Enter-QA@Com
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whoa!.!.!. *starts clapping* Yay! You get a 400 thousand! sequel sequel sequel!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
lol omg, r u DRUNK!? O!.O jk
um, well your story is pretty much making fun of cereal characters (r u eating cereal!?), and making fun of a lotta people that used to be on the news!. im not gonna rate it since 1!. u need to work on ur spelling (since some stuff was hard to understand), 2!. where's the main story line!?!?, and 3!. u should be careful about saying things that might get u reported (im just giving u a heads up)!.
if u do write a sequel, sure i'd read it, but give it a MAIN THEME/main character!. im sure it'd be a lot more interesting!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
um, well your story is pretty much making fun of cereal characters (r u eating cereal!?), and making fun of a lotta people that used to be on the news!. im not gonna rate it since 1!. u need to work on ur spelling (since some stuff was hard to understand), 2!. where's the main story line!?!?, and 3!. u should be careful about saying things that might get u reported (im just giving u a heads up)!.
if u do write a sequel, sure i'd read it, but give it a MAIN THEME/main character!. im sure it'd be a lot more interesting!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
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!.!.!.wow graphic!.!.!.umm!. first, plz use periods and commas!. the story was a bit difficult to read!. Besides that, the Michael Jackson ending left me confused!. If theres a sequel, i suggest keeping MJ out of it!. The "cereal" killer concept is funny!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
!.!.!.wow graphic!.!.!.umm!. first, plz use periods and commas!. the story was a bit difficult to read!. Besides that, the Michael Jackson ending left me confused!. If theres a sequel, i suggest keeping MJ out of it!. The "cereal" killer concept is funny!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i didn't like it at all!.to me the story is pointless & makes no sense the first time you read it!.if you're gonna write a story at least use correct spelling & grammar & proofread it before you submit!.
you get a 0 from me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
you get a 0 from me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
dude i loved
1-10 i give 100
i mean it was just awsome
make another
that was nice everybody killin everybody
but micheal jackson shuold die next
X DWww@Enter-QA@Com
1-10 i give 100
i mean it was just awsome
make another
that was nice everybody killin everybody
but micheal jackson shuold die next
X DWww@Enter-QA@Com
Whoaa dude
lolzzz dayummm u have a reall gud imagination XD!
yupp yupp u need a sequel!
story is a ten!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
lolzzz dayummm u have a reall gud imagination XD!
yupp yupp u need a sequel!
story is a ten!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Weird!. But if you wanna post stories and let people read them, go to testriffic!.comWww@Enter-QA@Com
Ugh!.
0/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
0/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
lol that rox 10/10 XDWww@Enter-QA@Com