What do you think of my Manga drawing?!
Question: What do you think of my Manga drawing!?
This is not a promotional thing!.
Totally NOT!.
I don't have ANY critics or art teachers to help me, and I would like to become a sort of Manga-ka at some point, so I would appreciate your imput!!
Please give me constructive critisism on my drawing!.
I would appreciate it!!
http://photobucket!.com/image/jason%20nak!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Totally NOT!.
I don't have ANY critics or art teachers to help me, and I would like to become a sort of Manga-ka at some point, so I would appreciate your imput!!
Please give me constructive critisism on my drawing!.
I would appreciate it!!
http://photobucket!.com/image/jason%20nak!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
good job putting the neck and upper chest
ok
first thing that popped at me was the neck
neck is suppose to be fluid, not like "L" where line all of a sudden changes 90 degrees
eye areas needs to be darker
and right eye and eyebrow seems too long
more tonal contrast for overall picture
example: Ear!. it needs to have its darkest dark as well as the highlight!. Here i only see 2 tones, which are quite similar!.
Create strong contrast between them or use more tones
that line: is im assuming suggesting sternomastoid (neck muscle)!. Muscle doesn't have hard line like that!.
(see the lines on your finger when you make a hard fist!? thats hard edged crease finger and palm creates!. But fingers by itself in just free position those are soft edged!.)
so that muscle has to be done the same way you have done for the collar bones!. as soft edge!.
lastly, where you right your name you extend the countour line !. That looks like his chest is long and creates that beautiful composition out of balance!.
Just write your signiture off it, or else where, its eye grabbing in someways!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
ok
first thing that popped at me was the neck
neck is suppose to be fluid, not like "L" where line all of a sudden changes 90 degrees
eye areas needs to be darker
and right eye and eyebrow seems too long
more tonal contrast for overall picture
example: Ear!. it needs to have its darkest dark as well as the highlight!. Here i only see 2 tones, which are quite similar!.
Create strong contrast between them or use more tones
that line: is im assuming suggesting sternomastoid (neck muscle)!. Muscle doesn't have hard line like that!.
(see the lines on your finger when you make a hard fist!? thats hard edged crease finger and palm creates!. But fingers by itself in just free position those are soft edged!.)
so that muscle has to be done the same way you have done for the collar bones!. as soft edge!.
lastly, where you right your name you extend the countour line !. That looks like his chest is long and creates that beautiful composition out of balance!.
Just write your signiture off it, or else where, its eye grabbing in someways!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Looks pretty good! The only thing is I think the forehead might be a little too small!. Try raising the hair line just a bit and on the one part of the neck the shadow is off, it kind of makes the neck look a little weird!. It's on the left where the shoulder meets the neck!. Everything else looks great!! :) Nice work!! You should make a deviant account if you don't already have one!. Hope I helped some!. :) http://www!.deviantart!.comWww@Enter-QA@Com
Very excellent! The only thing I would add would be defining the shading and shadows some more to make it more dramatic!. But if you don't want to, you don't have to!.
Is this a portrait of a real-life person, or just some dude you made up!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Is this a portrait of a real-life person, or just some dude you made up!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
The mouth is kind of wonky and there isn't much flair to detail, but It's stunning nonetheless!. Keep improving and you'll make a fine Mangaka!. ^^Www@Enter-QA@Com
i love it!
but improve the nose , its kinda small
and add more details to the hair
nice drawing!
can you make a girl version!?
:)Www@Enter-QA@Com
but improve the nose , its kinda small
and add more details to the hair
nice drawing!
can you make a girl version!?
:)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Pretty good :) Hair needs way more definition, but his eyes are perfect (and those are so hard to draw!)!. Shading is nice, as well!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
nic
luv the eyes but the lips look kinda weird and his hair is too flatWww@Enter-QA@Com
luv the eyes but the lips look kinda weird and his hair is too flatWww@Enter-QA@Com
niceWww@Enter-QA@Com
Wow very very good love it!! I'll look foward to see more of your drawings!.Www@Enter-QA@Com