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Question: Im trying to get a manga together but im not exactly sure how to go about it. I've got a small plotline and i was hoping to get some feedback, positive and negative....
The human's and demons have a long line of history. Humans and Demons have in habited th earth for centuries, but the two could never see on level terms. The Demons apperance and natural strength was not admied by the humans and the humans greediness and thirst for power was not looked upon favourably by the demons. After years of trying to find common ground, all seemed to be in vain. The humans plotted against the demons to wipe out their entire race in a surprise attack, but would fail and were were forced to withdraw and leave the land. The demons never wanting to be threatened again used their demonic powers to create a deity of their own with great power to summon in a time of need. The deity would only be able to be summoned by someone able to perform the demon technique properly. The demons created 5 stones..
Answers: Im trying to get a manga together but im not exactly sure how to go about it. I've got a small plotline and i was hoping to get some feedback, positive and negative....
The human's and demons have a long line of history. Humans and Demons have in habited th earth for centuries, but the two could never see on level terms. The Demons apperance and natural strength was not admied by the humans and the humans greediness and thirst for power was not looked upon favourably by the demons. After years of trying to find common ground, all seemed to be in vain. The humans plotted against the demons to wipe out their entire race in a surprise attack, but would fail and were were forced to withdraw and leave the land. The demons never wanting to be threatened again used their demonic powers to create a deity of their own with great power to summon in a time of need. The deity would only be able to be summoned by someone able to perform the demon technique properly. The demons created 5 stones..
Not bad. Seems a little common. This seems like it has the "Play it safe" type of storyline. If you do get this published then your title will have to be very good and the cover will need to be nice or else people will pass it by. It also seems kind of weird to see humans on the offense. That's different and new. Make sure the main character has cool ablities too. Try to be original as possible. You keep asking the questions and i'll keep answering.
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*tears up* its good really good but its a manga right? you sure you can draw all that? its a good story line and i think there should be a sequal if you ever get it published =) its good thought really good but maybe you should call the demons something else? just a thought but yea..