What do you think of this idea for my manga?!
Question: i really work hard on this, so please don't insult or criticize it badly.
here's the plot of my manga "Blue Moon":
Mitsuki Hirai is a freshman at Seino High School, she is also known as a tensai or a prodigy, and a basketball all-star rookie. On the day of her 15th birthday, a new student named Daniel Bautista, revealed that Mitsuki is a descendant of a bloodline that can make her transform into a legendary water guardian, called Blue Moon. Daniel also introduced him as a fire guardian, and explained his mission to train Mitsuki for their battle against John Hades. Hades is a man that can control electricity. Due to many threats in Japan, Daniel and Mitsuki have to require help from the other elemental guardians: the earth guardian, Koyada Lee from China, and the wind guardian, Melody Wilson from the United States. Together they will acquire the power of the legendary elemental element void to defeat Hades.
Answers: i really work hard on this, so please don't insult or criticize it badly.
here's the plot of my manga "Blue Moon":
Mitsuki Hirai is a freshman at Seino High School, she is also known as a tensai or a prodigy, and a basketball all-star rookie. On the day of her 15th birthday, a new student named Daniel Bautista, revealed that Mitsuki is a descendant of a bloodline that can make her transform into a legendary water guardian, called Blue Moon. Daniel also introduced him as a fire guardian, and explained his mission to train Mitsuki for their battle against John Hades. Hades is a man that can control electricity. Due to many threats in Japan, Daniel and Mitsuki have to require help from the other elemental guardians: the earth guardian, Koyada Lee from China, and the wind guardian, Melody Wilson from the United States. Together they will acquire the power of the legendary elemental element void to defeat Hades.
u r great i love everything after on the day of her 15th birthday. u have a great imagination and it was great to use people from differnt places also transforming makes people want to know what they will look like. but there is a tiny part that doesnt fit the story. the part with basketball rookie thing if u are going into mystical things it is usually done in the old ages or if u want to it could be modern but if the person were in all star rookie they would be famous and that would risk them being exposed ( people finding out that she is a guardian) u know but since its a small detail it probably wont matter. but I LOVE UR IDEA its good enough to be published for real!
i like it.. it sounds cool, i'd read it.
You can do it put your back into it.
I think it sounds very interesting!
And it does not stink!
Sounds good...but to me It sounds sorta similar to Avatar the Last Air Bender or whatever it was called. Just with a school student in modern times. I just had to say it T,T
it's awesome, go for it for your project, I hope you'll finish it as soon as possible : )
COOL!!!! Go for it!! when ur done i wanna read!
I like it! Keep working on it! go for it!
I love it! I would devinetly read it. I say your next priority is to lay out your first chapter/book. How will the 2 meet? How will Mitsuki first take the news? What is John's first attack move? Focus on those details and then get the smaller details figured out. Then work on the art.
=GREAT!=FANTASTIC!=COOL!
I love it,,,
It's sorta kind of like Avatar
But it's very interesting,,,
Hope it will be out on the market...
I'd Gonna buy one of it...
I hope that it will be known in the world of anime
-GOOD LUCK-
Continue with it because it might be your key to your success.
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You have your own manga idea? That's cool, and good luck on that.... I have my own as well, actually had it since I was 14. I have a copyright on it and everything but..... kinda gave up on it about 6 years ago......