Can you rate my comic?!


Question: Is it really worth reading? Or should I just give up now,cause I re-did it over 10 times already...

http://pic7.piczo.com/Jessica-original/?...


Answers: Is it really worth reading? Or should I just give up now,cause I re-did it over 10 times already...

http://pic7.piczo.com/Jessica-original/?...

It's great and funny!
The character is easy to understand and to bond to, you must continue it.
I like the drawing style and you good with proportions and perspective but you should work more on the faces and clarity. I suggest you to draw it in a software I think it will look way better like that but about the story line, nothing to worry about it's awesome.

kinda boring. Put more action in it.

Okay.....

The Good: Your artistic style....very retro-underground-early-80s-comic-style....

The Also Good: Her thinking about burning people at the stake...not sure if you meant that to be funny or not, but I thought it was hilarious...

The So-So: Is she supposed to be talking to herself out loud? I'm not sure, but I think "thought balloons" would be more appropriate.

The Sort of Bad: The story...sorry, I'm old and I just don't get it.

you tried to hard on the pictures and it not really funny,but there aren't any funny comic these days.

P.S try turning your comic into a drama with a lot of twists and suprise ending

I'm not sure what kind of story you were going for, it was kinda of all over the place. If that was just the begining, it was good. I enjoyed the humor, but whats up with the frogs and why did the guy beat her with the bat? Anyway if it's just the begining, good start

i love ur drawings! but lay up on the jokes. and the story plot is great! im taking it this is the first issue. if i had to rate it based on how much i read, itd be about a 8/10. keep workin on it!!!!!

Not bad your theme needs a little umpf but its a start ,your style is similar to the fantastic four unstable molocules that was a 4 iss mini series.dont give up keep trying

good i guess, drawings kind of stink no offence



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