Character help..?!
Question: I'm working on a action fantasy yaoi romance roleplay. I need help making the Four Commanders, four very powerful minions that work under their lord, Masato.
I already have a commander done for the story. Tsuki, a mastermind at weapons and fighting with swords. Betrays his master to go to the good side because he falls for one of the members.
For the other three, just give me some ideas. There should be one female commander. Please give me a idea, I'll make sure to say thanks when they show up in the roleplay with my friend.
Answers: I'm working on a action fantasy yaoi romance roleplay. I need help making the Four Commanders, four very powerful minions that work under their lord, Masato.
I already have a commander done for the story. Tsuki, a mastermind at weapons and fighting with swords. Betrays his master to go to the good side because he falls for one of the members.
For the other three, just give me some ideas. There should be one female commander. Please give me a idea, I'll make sure to say thanks when they show up in the roleplay with my friend.
Ima, a seductive blonde who uses her cleavage to control the other commanders into doing whatever she wants. She should have a really revealing outfit in the front. Her hair should be straight and black. Her eyes should be piercing silver. She could be skilled at using a long sword, or bow and arrows. She should always have a flower in her hair. Her beauty should be her most powerful weapon....one of the other commanders should always try to hook up with her, and end miserably....oh and if somebody tried to touch her she should beat the crap out of them or threaten them somehow. I think that would add some sass to her character.
Koyto, an old man with glasses. Medium gray hair, and dark eyes. He could use a talent like maybe telapathic, mind control, and a sword. He could be your funny character...make him really funny, and do weird stuff....like if they're just sitting down make him start singing and everybody look at him.
Each of the commanders should have an abnormal, or cool, power.
ps....is this your second question about this story? btw if this story is ever published I would be first in line to read it. It sounds really cool.
that sounds like an awesome story... you HAVE to send it to me when you are done...
anyway, back to your question. i think the girl should be totally powerful; not enough to overshadow the guys, but noteworthy... she should be a martial arts master, and absolutely gorgeous so she can use that as a weapon... also, she should appear seemingly harmless; only so she could kick *** later. i have no idea as to her name, but i'm sure you can figure that out. she should be loyal to Masato because maybe she respects him for beating her fair and square in the past. she should also be virtually undefeated.
as for the other two guys...
one should be kind of a goof... every story needs a comic relief character that is made fun of. though he should be quite clever, when he actually puts his mind to a problem, which is rare. he should be in the group just kind of... along for the ride, i guess, but completely loyal nonetheless.
the other guy should be maybe a little egotistical, but loved for his one flaw. he should be full of himself with reason, because he should be way powerful in practically every aspect of battle, and beautiful on the side. he should exercise precision and grace constantly. he should even maybe instill awe in the characters...
i have no idea who Tsuki should fall for. it would be fine if it was the girl, but since it is yaoi, either guy could work out... he could enjoy the innocent love and happiness with the goof, or maybe even awe with the beauty of the ego-maniac being the only person to understand him fully. it basically depends on whether you want him to be seme or uke.
whatever you choose, good luck, and please let me know what happens!