I made a new manga storyline. Tell me what u think.?!
Question: I've finally come up with a storyline for my new manga. It's about a boy who is living an average life, in a house in the woods with his father. One day he and his friend go exploring a little ways from home.They discover a Village that turns out to be an old tribe hideout. He finds half of a medallion in one of the burned down tents. He recognizes this as the medallion his father gave him, but he only gave him half and he has found the other half at this camp. He goes home to ask his father what this means and he tells him that he has a brother that dissapeared one day.He goes off on a search for his long lost brother.
Please leave any comments u have on how i could improve this story and dont be too harsh XD. Ty
Answers: I've finally come up with a storyline for my new manga. It's about a boy who is living an average life, in a house in the woods with his father. One day he and his friend go exploring a little ways from home.They discover a Village that turns out to be an old tribe hideout. He finds half of a medallion in one of the burned down tents. He recognizes this as the medallion his father gave him, but he only gave him half and he has found the other half at this camp. He goes home to ask his father what this means and he tells him that he has a brother that dissapeared one day.He goes off on a search for his long lost brother.
Please leave any comments u have on how i could improve this story and dont be too harsh XD. Ty
good outline though you can give the medallion a special purpose and probably make the brother a good egg gone bad and the two get locked in a fight for power because the boy leanrs that he and his family derived from a special tribe that holds the rights to untold power....HA! thats imagination for you buddy
I think thats actually a pretty good plot. Though the only thing i suggest is that you make the boy find companions and such as he travels. Also make him go around the world. That would be cool. ^_^
maybe the medallion could give him some kind of super cool power. other than that good start and good luck!
i think its good..
but i kinda prefer romance, comedy though ;)