I was thinking to write a fanfiction can you tell me if my idea is good?!


Question: it;s about naruto he was just coming back from a mission heading back to konoha along the way he found this girl next do the river side very badly wounded. and he caries her back to konoha. tsunade look at her saying she is in crytical condition that is a mirical that she is syill alive right now she treats her wounds and she was also poisned. moment passed the treatment was done she was recovering in the hospital, mean while naruto and tsunade and sakura was talking abot the girl saying she was in a terible fight. the girl can't remeber evrything off her past when she wakes up. later on in the story kakashi and tsunade finds out that that girl was being chased by the akatski and meanwhile naruto have a tighter bond with the girl becuase thegirl also have no parents and also have a demon sealed in side her. the five tail dog demon (Five Tailed Demon - Gobi no Houkou, takes the form of a dog in Japanese mythology) and so it goes on when they so on.


Answers: it;s about naruto he was just coming back from a mission heading back to konoha along the way he found this girl next do the river side very badly wounded. and he caries her back to konoha. tsunade look at her saying she is in crytical condition that is a mirical that she is syill alive right now she treats her wounds and she was also poisned. moment passed the treatment was done she was recovering in the hospital, mean while naruto and tsunade and sakura was talking abot the girl saying she was in a terible fight. the girl can't remeber evrything off her past when she wakes up. later on in the story kakashi and tsunade finds out that that girl was being chased by the akatski and meanwhile naruto have a tighter bond with the girl becuase thegirl also have no parents and also have a demon sealed in side her. the five tail dog demon (Five Tailed Demon - Gobi no Houkou, takes the form of a dog in Japanese mythology) and so it goes on when they so on.

Your story sounds very good.
I'll read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'd read it.

Sounds nice. I'd read it too!!!

Tell me when you post it! I'm so bored I can't wait!!!

=D

well... The things I relize is, how do they know she was in a fight with the akatski? When she wakes up does she remember what happened? I like the storyline and you should keep with it, just give it good deep thought and detail about who knows the information about her, if you know what I mean.

Like does she freak out when she wakes up in a hospital? Does she trust Naruto and everyone when she wakes up not knowing where she is? You know what I mean?

It is a good idea. What about the other characters? Will some of the characters have a tighter bond to other people? Please do a nice couple and adveture story.
(SasuHina Please!) > <

ooh that's a good one. please send it to me when you post it. i would totally read it.

Hmm... Interesting idea, but then again....

1. Who poisoned her? I don't know any Akatsuki member who could deal with poison...... Oh, it may be Sasori..... if he's still alive.

2. What do you mean with, "The girl can't remember everything off (?) her past when she wakes up"? Does it mean:

a) She doesn't remember whom she fought with? or
b) She doesn't remember everything, including her name? If that so, no one should find out that she has a Bijuu sealed inside her, no? Because that basically means she forgot that she had a demon as well.

About her being an orphan..... since she was found alone, it may be plausible. But who knows if she actually had parents?

3. I don't think Kakashi and Tsunade will find out that the girl was chased by Akatsuki that easily. Especially when the victim was the only witness and she forgot everything. Even if they found it out, there's no proof from the victim herself so they could only assume.

4. Akatsuki victims (aside from Naruto) could rarely, RARELY escape them, you know. Naruto was lucky everyone was there defending him (translation: he wasn't alone when he was attacked). With this set in mind, and considering she would regain her memories anytime soon;

a) Will she tell how could she escape them? I want to know how would she escape death, too. :)
b) Since she was wounded and such, does it mean she's a ninja? Or a mere, ordinary girl with extraordinary super power?

These points do sound rude (I know, especially when I'm not the one writing it) but you may have to do more revisions and researches to make the "This girl is the Five-tailed Demon Beast" fanfic possible.

Have a nice day. :)



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