What do you think of this song?!
Question:
What do you think of this song?
ok just a song i wrote for my band umm i dont know about it ...........not my best its still chopped up not really in verses just think of it as a poem i guess....
When you hear the saying you feel it’s not worth playing
Every single day I see more backs turn away
The feeling rots down into my weighing bones
Doubt starts clawing my mind
The feeling crawls all over
I remember what you did
Thinking maybe this will help but nothing can heal what you said
I walk around with a knife jammed in my head
But that wont put you to bed
Sick of all the weight
I start to wishing for my fate
There’s nothing you can say
That takes my breath away
You stole what I need back
It’s the heart that you lack
What you caused me cant be explained
Shivers in my spine
Thorns in my side
Now the only sin I lack is priiide
The pain that I feel
I find myself hoping that it’s all not real
And when your heart starts beating
Your start to show no feeling
ehh cant fit anymore
Answers:
get a good guaitar add a nice beat and yeah nice song