How's my poem about a girl?!
Question: How's my poem about a girl!?
I wrote this poem about my ex(still good friends)
When I saw your eyes
I shivered
When I told you I love you
I meant it for eternity
Your smile lightened up the dark clouds
You brought me out of the depression
I broke your heart
But I'll put the pieces back together
I know roses won't due
That's why I'll just say I love you
Sorry about wrong section thought I'd show the soft side of me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
When I saw your eyes
I shivered
When I told you I love you
I meant it for eternity
Your smile lightened up the dark clouds
You brought me out of the depression
I broke your heart
But I'll put the pieces back together
I know roses won't due
That's why I'll just say I love you
Sorry about wrong section thought I'd show the soft side of me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Awww!.!.!.!.
Very sweet!. :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Very sweet!. :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
McCain huh!.!.!.!? To tell you the truth I'm super liberal, but I gotta admit even I might've voted for John instead of Obama (McCain does have several policies I agree with, plus I'm not so sure Barrack is the right person to take us out of this economic rut we're in), that is before Palin joined the ticket!.!.!.I realized the other day that if McCain dies during his term Palin would take over and I just can't take that chance!.!.!.Anyway, sorry about getting off topic!. Hell of a poem bro!. Seriously, I absolutely hate poetry, but this is awesome! Looks like my list of poets I like just doubled!.!.!.(Robert Frost and you)Www@Enter-QA@Com
usually i'd give crap about the wrong section, but this is just too good to diss!.
but you used the wrong 'due'!. its supposed to be 'do'!.
otherwise, awesome!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
but you used the wrong 'due'!. its supposed to be 'do'!.
otherwise, awesome!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
aww that's beautifulWww@Enter-QA@Com
Aww how sweet ;-) Www@Enter-QA@Com
sounds goodWww@Enter-QA@Com
its beautiful, i wish it was for meWww@Enter-QA@Com