Do you think this is a good short-story? btw i wrote it?!
Question: Do you think this is a good short-story!? btw i wrote it!?
There is a girl who loves to sing and act, she sings in front of the mirror all day long!. So she finds out that there will be a disney musical shooting at her school!. Its High school musical 4! So she descides to audition, and along the way she sees how tough it is to compete against other people!. And then, she gets the part as a background girl, but whom shows up alot in the movie!. And then, all the fame shes getting just from being in the background, makes producers in other shows and movies like her, and ask her if she wants a record deal, she's kinda excited and scared because she doesn't know, she doesn't have any friends to help her, so she just decides on her own to take the opportunity! And all the fame and new friends she loves it, but then she gets kinda scared and forgets about her family and she wants her old life back, and all her new "friends" are brats and she doesn't know who to trust, so she goes to her older sister for help, and her older sister says "I'm sorry, I don't know I've never been famous!." and so she makes friends with Selena Gomez, and she asks her if she's ever wanted her old life back, so she can make true friends, and selena says "sometimes, but then I act in another episode and it cheers me up!." so then the girl keeps talking to selena on advise and stuff, and eventually makes friends with Demi, and after being upset and wanting to make true friends for weeks and months, she founds out, she already had it! Her best friends were her family, Demi, and Selena, and she gets soo happy she finally found where she wants to be, a famous singer and actress with the greatest friends you could possibly have! THE ENDWww@Enter-QA@Com
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u r outstanding!!! u should b proud of your self round of applause for you!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
wow, everyone is being really mean!. Don't listen to them!. It's an sort of an over-used plot, but I see some originality in it ;] It'd make a cute short-story!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
no offense, but it's really really really really really stupid and bad and retarded and boring!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
yes it is a good story, keep up the good work and try to make a big stories!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i dont wanna read it allWww@Enter-QA@Com
no it seems like a child wrote it!. It doesn't bring me into the storyWww@Enter-QA@Com
I don't want to say "no" because I don't want to discourage you from writing if that's what you love but I think it needs work!. The more you write the better you get!Www@Enter-QA@Com
good story i had a dream like that lol hmmmm i sound like the girl at the beginning who loves to sing and act and sings in front of a mirrror all day long but i never was involved in the celeb world ever but i might call some scouts or whatever that are looking for kids ages 4-17 i might enter,i was in a musical because everyone in the grade had to be in it i was going to audtion for a solo and kept changing my mind but i finally tried out and nearly fainted,i embrassed myself in front of the whole grade,i cant sing in front of people if i do i sound really bad but i can act in front of people lolWww@Enter-QA@Com